Because of the global economy many goods including what we use as daily basis produced by other countries have to be transported from a long distance To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Because of the global economy, many goods including what we use as daily basis produced by
other countries have to be transported from a long distance. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In consumerism society, the role of shipment in consumer products is widely debated, with many people
claiming that this will lead to a diallers of concerns in one’s life. As such there are both merits and demerits do it although former Outdo the later.

There is no doubt that moment of items from far distant areas has wealth of benefits , a variety of choices
being the pivotal one. Shipping of goods from other nations can not only contribute to improving nation’s
economy, but also lead to other numerous benefits in various fields. Furthermore, individuals have an advantage in the area of diverse tastes of fruits and vegetables. In bygone age, masses knew New Zealand’fruit by its name, but now they have opportunity to taste it thanks to globalisation. Needless to say, all these positives stand people as well as society in good stead as far as their augmenting prosperity
and excellence is concerned.

Probing further, co-operation is another factor to strengthen bonds with another countries which would
be really helpful to facilitate the problem of downward economy. Also, it maximizes the productivity and
creates less friction between them. Hence, it is apparent that why many are in favour of it.

Nevertheless, despite the advantages, pollution is a minor drawback when goods are transported from
thousands of miles by different means of transports such as; road,air and sea. The cause of the problem
lies in the excessive usage of fossil fuels due to this itself increasing day by day. Thus, it goes without saying that why it is rejected by some.

In conclusion, from what has been discussed above, one can conclude that advantages such as diversity in choices and good relations with nations clearly outweigh any disadvantages associated with it.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, really, so, then, thus, well, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21724137931 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85263525513 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658620689655 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1374318621 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.071428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.38176352705 297% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174865210041 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454813832196 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410635216829 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0483956645614 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441642849903 0.056905535591 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Essay evaluations by e-grader

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, really, so, then, thus, well, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments