BENEFIT FROM FACEBOOK
Nowadays, the world is more modernize and industrial. Besides, the social networking websites are developing. Facebook is one of the best social networking websites in the world. But there are conflicting opinions about the social networking websites. In my opinion, Facebook has more advantages than disadvantages. There are some benefits below.
Firstly, social networking websites are an amazing way of keeping in touch with people who live a long away. In the past, if you want to say something to someone, you have to meet and then talk to the person. Talking directly to the person is the only way of communicate in the world at this time. But, in the present, Facebook is a different way of communicate to everybody. You can talk to someone whenever you want. You can save time and money by communicate from Facebook. Geographical distance is not a trouble too. Secondly, Facebook is a great way to connect with people who have similar interests to you. Finding the person who has similar interests is a difficulty in your life so that if you meet one’s desire, you should keep your friendship. Facebook helps you to do that. You can talk happily about same hobbies. Thirdly, you have the ability to see some photographs of family and friends. It makes the world feel like a smaller place. You can post and share some photos on Facebook. This is the way to share your happiness to everybody. In addition, if you can’t come some places, you will experience and imagine this place. Fourthly, you can also post and share statuses on Facebook. This is an online diary. Yahoo 360o blog used to be an online diary but blog was closed. Oppositely, Facebook is developing more and more. Fifthly, you also read news on Facebook. All news on Facebook is updating, you can see the world easily. If you don’t any have time to shopping, you can order online and pay by credit card. You also sell some products online when you create pages of your products. For virtual goods on Facebook (Games, applications...), we can buy by Facebook Credits, a virtual currency used to buy virtual goods in any games or apps of the Facebook platform that accept payments. Facebook also support over
80 payment methods around the word, including: Credit cards (American Express, Discover, MasterCard, Visa), PayPal, mobile phone number, Gift Cards, Other local payment methods. Playing games or using applications from Facebook is one of the ways to relax after you were tired. If you have some interests, you can follow Fan page on Facebook and then you are knowing development about your interests. Moreover, Facebook is allowed you to reconnect with lots of old friends. Finally, as a person who is studying or working, you can discuss some lessons or works on Facebook. You post and share information or announcements on pages or messages and then you can study or work effectively.
In conclusion, Facebook is one of the most famous social network in the word now. Facebook is available in 70 languages so that people in the world can use easily and conveniently. Facebook was controlled advertising and has many free services such as make a call via camera, send messages, play games, use applications,… . Through FB, millions of people can connecting, sharing, uploading information, pictures, video clips to each other and they can conduct business activities through various services offered by this website.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Fan) must be used with a third-person verb: 'pages'.
Suggestion: pages
...have some interests, you can follow Fan page on Facebook and then you are knowing de...
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Line 5, column 354, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[4]
Message: The verb know is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'know'
Suggestion: know
...ollow Fan page on Facebook and then you are knowing development about your interests. Moreo...
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Line 5, column 354, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ollow Fan page on Facebook and then you are knowing development about your interests. Moreo...
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Line 7, column 320, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...d messages, play games, use applications,… . Through FB, millions of people can co...
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Line 7, column 323, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...essages, play games, use applications,… . Through FB, millions of people can conn...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2847.0 1615.20841683 176% => OK
No of words: 572.0 315.596192385 181% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97727272727 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89045207381 4.20363070211 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.762384242 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 176.041082164 162% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 895.5 506.74238477 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 5.43587174349 368% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 41.0 16.0721442886 255% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2731099979 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4390243902 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9512195122 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73170731707 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 28.0 8.67935871743 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222334861608 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655081057672 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072655120882 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138001431526 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185276962025 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.