Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets, and groceries, … becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer ad included relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In a technology revolution world where the Internet has brought significant changes to human lives in recent years, people tend to purchase items online rather than going directly to a shop, a store or an agent. Although shopping online has several disadvantages, I personally believe that the conveniences of this kind of shopping far outweigh any drawbacks.
It seems apparent that the Internet fraud is increasingly recognized as the most dangerous, worldwide concern. Hackers may be able to make a copy of customer's credit card and steal the money unless the website which they provided their personal information is certainly secure. These days, as a consequence, an increasing number of online shops have offered better payment service which customers can pay directly at the delivery time. Further and even more importantly, though, people can’t examine the item until we receive it. In other words, people may occasionally buy what they do not really need. My sister, for instance, bought a blue handbag with a name tag on it. When receiving it, however, she realized that it wasn’t the one she had ordered, a dark blue instead of a light blue and a bell instead of a name tag. She felt extremely disappointed and said she would never buy anything from that shop again.
Despite the mentioned problems, buying things via the Internet, however, brings significant benefits. First of all, online shopping helps customers save their precious time as in the early times, they had wasted so much time on going around to buy items. With the development of the Internet, the entire world (and all the information in it) is at their fingertips. Wherever they are or whenever it is, customers are still capable of making a purchase with a simple click of a button. In addition, people are easily access to numerous shops with the same item which they are looking for. Comparing prices, addition service or checking, reviewing other customers’ feed backs are valuable benefits which the Internet purchasing provides buyers.
I had already experienced the wonderful benefit of buying things online. Despite how much effort I put into looking for a soap with my favorite flavor, I couldn’t find it in my country. Luckily, someday when surfing the Internet, I came across it at the Amazon.com. Therefore, I purchased it right away and what impressed me most was that I received it within such a short time, approximately 2 weeks from abroad.
In conclusion, I once reaffirm my position that buying things on the Internet has a positive impact on modern life due to its benefits, hence I believe it is going to bloom strongly so far.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, really, so, still, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 440.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02727272727 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80745392138 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 176.041082164 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595454545455 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2375173328 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9523809524 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2380952381 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125808549546 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378619261403 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252302584958 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701313206631 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00852445365187 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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