Car drivers and cyclists share the same path road and this can cause problems for both of them why is this case and what measures can be taken?
When motorists and cycle riders run on the same path , certainly it results in deterimental effects on both of them. Although , there are certain issues that are responsible for this which can be easily resolved by taking precautions and safeguarding the situation.
Firstly, the disparity in the sizes of vehicles on roads create difficulty to clearly visualise the small bicycles by car drivers.Moreovee,when huge size motor riders try to overtake , they accidentally collides with bicycles because of its small size. Secondly,the speed and Safe issues in bicycles, which are comparatively less than cars become dangerous for riders to drive safely on the same road. Ultimately, it results in plenty of accident s on roads and some of them are even fatal to death.
To ease this problem,on the one side there is need of developing proper infrastructure of roads ,which can be done by maintaining appropriate distance between cars and bicycles.It can be possible by separating the lanes .For instance-in most of the developed cities like Chandigarh there are separate bicycle lane which not only protects the riders from hazardous consequences of accidents but also maintain safety.On the other side,proper supervison of police to combat the Safety issues is necessary .This can be done by patrolling the areas where rules are not being followed ,the police can penalised the riders with fines. Consequently, Safety issues can be resolved and chances of casualities can be reduced.
To conclude, it is clear that occupying the same road by cyclists and car drivers has deleterious consequences on them,however better road planning and police supervision can alter this situation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33962264151 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10105607591 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611320754717 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 166.346588483 49.4020404114 337% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.875 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.125 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359561823286 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152778620495 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841233885207 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221795657325 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767355827563 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.