Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?
It is certainly true that traffic jam is one of the biggest problem all over the globe. In many cities people purchase their own car has been growing so rapidly in the last thirty years and due to increasing car ownership, many cities are now becoming one big traffic. I think this phenomenon is absolutely true. In this essay I explain what measures government has taken to stop using their own cars.
To begin with, There is a plethora of reason that people start to buying their own car. Firstly, In the modern phase of life everyone is busy in businesses, jobs, study etc. They prefer to take a personal vehicle to save their time. Another reason is that we don't depend on anyone if our personal car is with us because in emergencies cars are really useful. Secondly, Sometimes people also need a vehicle to to attend meetings and ceremony that can be held in a very short time.
Although, Increasing the car ownership has a considerable problem in all over the world and from this in many city traffic issues are rapidly growing day by day. There are a numerous measures that can government take to discourage people from using their own cars. One of the major problem is air pollution due to traffic jam. So, the Government can organise seminars for using less personal cars and give briefly explain about air pollution that if we are not taking care of our environment, then the day will not far at all that we all are put in the trouble.
Moreover, Another noticeable measure is that government encourages people to take public transportation in use daily basis. Also society, transportation is cheaper than a personal vehicle. It saves us a lot of time and duo to this also pollution will go down in control. For example, Due to covid19 our Indian Government will announce that 21 days of lockdown and no one should be allowed to take their personal vehicle and in result pollution ratio will down so rapidly. It is our onus that we have a knowledge about traffic and pollution.
In the conclusion, from all aforementioned points, I hold my view that the Government must take measures to solve this problem but also it is our onus that we have to cooperate with it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'measure'?
Suggestion: measure
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...blic transportation in use daily basis. Also society transporatatrtion is cheap than...
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Message: Did you mean 'allowed'?
Suggestion: allowed
...1 days of lockdown and no one should be allow to take their personal vehicle and in r...
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Message: Did you mean 'taking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: taking
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, for example, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69291338583 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58126308299 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50656167979 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3621524944 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1052631579 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0526315789 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36842105263 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436840737499 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124525056077 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107044689867 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246134495535 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170908130738 0.056905535591 300% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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