In the age of technologies TV plays a vital role in our life and it has become an integral feature of almost every household in the world. As a result, children undoubtedly spend more time to watch television than previous generation and less time being active. There are several reasons for this phenomenon and in this essay I will explain these and try to give some solution which can be taken in order to tackle these issues.
Nowadays, there are too many TV programs which cause to waste children’s more time. Cartoons, TV shows and game shows attract great number of children viewers. The other reason for the increase in television viewing is related to the amount of time young people and children have these days. They have too many lessons and parents also drive them to attend extra courses, so they are simply too tired to go and play or do sports. Instead of these, they prefer just playing computer games or watching TV at home.
However, it is still crucial that children spend enough time outdoors playing and being active. There are number of actions to tackle this issue. One of them is motivate young generation by parents. Namely, parents should spend more time with their children to play physical games and outdoor activities. For instance, swimming over the sea with family can encourage children. Although it takes lots of time, such kind of outdoor activities are more beneficial for children than electron devises as well as watching TV.
In conclusion, because of modern, interesting and new TV programs’ some bad influence, the young people waste their most time for them. Instead of this, they should be encouraged to play sports by parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'wasting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: wasting
...re are too many TV programs which cause to waste children's more time. Cartoons, TV...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'motivated'.
Suggestion: motivated
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lectron devises as well as watching TV. In conclusion, because of modern, intere...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91228070175 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50275563734 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582456140351 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0289500806 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181264271861 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650018289391 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500533957203 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113623903958 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505411618859 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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