Children should do organized activities in their free time while others believe children should be free to do what they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
In recent decades, there has been growing attention to children's entertainment in their leisure time. Although, it is plausible to say that young children can deliberately choose any activities which are appalling to them, adults still play an indispensable role in shaping their children’s acts, which would benefit their offsprings as a whole.
On the one hand, It is evident that the freedom of choosing what activities children would like to engage in works as an incentive to encourage their development. When kids are provided with the discretion to create their own recreational games, they would enhance self-reliant capability, helping them later on in adulthood. As the result of independence formed from their childhood, kids are more likely to be mature earlier compared to their peers, which can be seen as the advantage for parents to concentrate on their career path instead of spending too much time looking after their offsprings.
On the other hand, plays organized by adults could be beneficial in some aspects. It can be witnessed that children could not orientate themselves since they do not have enough perspectives about life. Therefore, the adults have to educate their kids to avoid being caught up in the pitfalls of life. Being instructed and oriented, children will develop a comprehensive understanding about the social norms and legal law as they learn how to comply with organized games created by adults. In addition, with the vigorous enhancement of technology and science, we could be able to analyze the eminent prowess of children thereby organizing plays fitting to their inclination. Dermatoglyphics, for instance, could help parents to realize their offspring's inclination, from that having the right orientation to choose plays for their children.
In conclusion, raising children has been baffling parenthood for a long time. In order to optimize the upbringing, adults ought to combine organized activities and free their children’s plays reasonably based on the empirical research of scientists together with their own experience.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, still, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45061728395 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99702641839 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4699466639 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.846153846 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276313006483 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105829267015 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348474170479 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174025558815 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250599450277 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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