Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective :
1. Comics
2. Books.
3. Radio
4. Television
5. Film
6. Theater.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
People nowadays have different pleasure in getting new information and communication. Some believe that gaining new information from Comics, Film and Theatre are the best media. While I would argue that Books, Television, and Radio are the most beneficial media for collecting new information.
There are various reasons why people tend to like gaining information from comics, theatre and film. Firstly, they are easy to be reached. These medias are very close to common people. Secondly, those who like spending time in entertainment will find it easy to get in touch with new information. Finally, young generation prefer to look for the source of information by watching movie or reading comics or social medias. These are efficient since all the new information will be spread very easy to teenagers.
However, I would argue that those medias mentioned above are the effective way to deliver the new information to people. In particular, we have to consider that Books, Television and Radios are the best source to spread the news. For instance, Television and Radios are the fastest devices to deliver the news to common people. In case there is a disaster in one place, hence there will be a headline news in TV or Radio. Another case is that if one government in one country held an election tv or radio sometimes broadcast it live. So the people will b much faster to transform new information. Moreover, books and magazines are also the best source in gathering new information. They are usually published weekly or daily to update what is happening lately. They are not only updated but also cheap then most people afford to buy.
In conclusion, it is clear to me that books, television and radio are the most beneficial media in collecting updated news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97635135135 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71533996556 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.3424324302 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.5263157895 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5789473684 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84210526316 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118954954642 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401594849804 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349672295234 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840966064306 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122139144126 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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