Computer Becomes the feature of human s life. But there are some disadvantages also . Write the advantages and Disadvantages?

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Computer Becomes the feature of human s life. But there are some disadvantages also . Write the advantages and Disadvantages?

There is no doubt, computer era is technical era.it is increased day by day.people get a lot of knowledge.Before giving any point of view let us discuss about following paragraphs.
firstly computer is a entertainment source for example when people feel bored they can listen to music and play electronic games.people can gained enhance knowledge about history,culture,news so on.with the help of computer people can do work easily for example people

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Average: 2.2 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Before
...ay by day.people get a lot of knowledge.Before giving any point of view let us discuss...
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Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ay by day.people get a lot of knowledge.Before giving any point of view let us discuss...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...us discuss about following paragraphs. firstly computer is a entertainment source for ...
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Line 2, column 21, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...lowing paragraphs. firstly computer is a entertainment source for example when p...
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Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , culture
...n gained enhance knowledge about history,culture,news so on.with the help of computer pe...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'so', 'for example', 'no doubt']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.350649350649 0.247107183377 142% => OK
Verbs: 0.220779220779 0.155533422707 142% => OK
Adjectives: 0.025974025974 0.0946595960268 27% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0519480519481 0.0501214627716 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.025974025974 0.0437548338989 59% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116883116883 0.122226691241 96% => OK
Participles: 0.038961038961 0.0403226058552 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.50027629482 2.80594681477 125% => OK
Infinitives: 0.012987012987 0.0326793684256 40% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0649350649351 0.0861772015684 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.038961038961 0.021408717616 182% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.012987012987 0.011925033212 109% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 451.0 1933.35771543 23% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 71.0 316.048096192 22% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.35211267606 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.90278310819 4.20517956788 69% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.422535211268 0.374742101984 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.281690140845 0.28420135186 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.197183098592 0.203846283523 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.154929577465 0.137316102897 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50027629482 2.80594681477 125% => OK
Unique words: 56.0 176.037074148 32% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.788732394366 0.56093040696 141% => OK
Word variations: 78.6745964537 60.7387585426 130% => OK
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0891783567 12% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 35.5 20.7743622355 171% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5 49.517814964 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 225.5 127.492653851 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.5 20.7743622355 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 0.814263465372 307% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38877755511 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 63.6690140845 49.1944974215 129% => OK
Elegance: 1.69565217391 1.69124875643 100% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105473545391 0.332605444948 32% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.147185965735 0.102741220458 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0 0.0668466124924 0% => Sentences are so close to each other.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.534860350844 187% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 7.85046229342e-17 0.148594505496 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787910040422 0.134430193775 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00900724825519 0.0742795772207 12% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.147185965735 0.324371583561 45% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0 0.0638462369009 0% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787910040422 0.228012699653 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00900724825519 0.058150111329 15% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.68436873747 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 5.90881763527 17% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 2.0 10.4468937876 19% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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