The continued rise in the world s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time What are the causes of this continued rise Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity
There is a widespread belief that the increase of global demography is recently the greastest issue human society has to deal with. As far as i am concerned, there is a variety of reason leading to this. However, there is a number of other problems faced by humanity along with the stumbling block aforementioned.
The continued rise in overall worldwide population is the result of many different factors. It is firstly due to poor system of family management in under-developed countries. In those nations, a common traddition and belief that the more larger the family is the more wealth they become resulted in women give more births to child. Along with the feeblest construction of family managing system, the demography of the nation is expanding with regardless of the development of national wealth. Another reason involved with the increase of global population is the fact that there are many people who are poorly given or not educated about birth control.
I do understand that some people may think differently, saying that the world still has a bigger problem rather than population growth, for example, war and terrorism. However, we have to realize that those are also affected by population growth, the more populated this world the more problem we gained, the more greenery spaces replaced by housing area, unequal quantity between job vacancy and job seekers, meaning more poverty is threatening.
In conclusion, the causes of overall worldwide population's increase vary, and as the result, this is going to be a major threat to human society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29556650246 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92319604285 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581280788177 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4690621977 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157140520893 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647812141894 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687829686009 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999079942317 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513480876183 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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