The cots of international travel are decreasing and tourism is growing. What are the advantages and disadvantages of increasing tourism activity in different countries.
With globalized world, people have tendency to spend more time and money getting away from the noisy of daily life, hence, traveling around the world becomes more and more popular trend. The costs of tourism going oversea are cheaper then previously resulted in a boost to international tourism. This essay will discuss both pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is undeniable that there are some positive influences of increasing global travel on both destinations and travelers. First and foremost, the strong development of tourism creates countless opportunities about careers for residents. For instance, to attract more tourists to visit one place, the country must invest more budget on building resorts, hotels or other services. As a result, habitants will be hired for these jobs. One other advantage is that having experienced phenomenal growth in tourism will contribute a huge amount of revenue on country's economy. The fact shows that a decrease in price of worldwide package holidays means that there is a boost tourism, therefore, the economy of this nation will develop significantly. In addition, in terms of travelers, it is a good chance for them to access a world of culture. More places they go, more culture they absorb.
On the other hand, there are also some drawbacks of raising tourism. Firstly, the growth of tourism affect negatively on environment such as the pollution of air, land or beach. For example, in the height of tourist season, beaches are always swarming with holidaymakers, they sometimes litter the garbage like plastic bags, canned or other rubbish along the seashore. This not only deteriorate the environment of tourist destinations but also make the image of these places worse. Moreover, the diversity of tourists can bring bad behavior that impact adversely on local culture. For example, tourists who come from some different countries can have some words or manners which are not suitable with cultural local.
In conclusion, although the growing trend of tourism industry has a lot of benefits for many countries, there are some disadvantages that global travel brings to these nations. I strongly believe that the government should impose some regulations for the tourism sectors to make the most of tourism's profits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cheaper than'?
Suggestion: cheaper than
... The costs of tourism going oversea are cheaper then previously resulted in a boost to inter...
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Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the tourisms') or simply say ''most tourisms''.
Suggestion: most of the tourisms; most tourisms
...ons for the tourism sectors to make the most of tourisms profits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24250681199 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70071374492 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594005449591 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7335362994 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.263157895 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3157894737 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36842105263 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198041525717 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603798794365 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662066643736 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128186974267 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546623946682 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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