creative artist should always be given the freedom to express their own idea in words, pictures, music etc in whichever they wish. there should no government restrictions on what they do.
to what extend do you agree with this opinion ?
According to a famous aphorism ; art knows no boundaries. To boost creativity and productivity, it is necessary that an artist uses all means by which he finds best to express himself. Some believe that an artist's work should be totally unsupervised. This essay will argue how strongly it is needed for an artist to exercise his freedom of perception to succeed.
Art is hugely diversified. Fields like painting, pottery, carving and textile making require fine men with great deal of talent. Their traits could be polished and enhanced if we let them experiment with their thoughts. this can result in huge successes. For instance, in 2016 when textile designers improvised fabric by writing poetry on clothes which could not be fathomed as appropriate by the public, turned out to be a huge success. Therefore letting one's thoughts run wild and taking risks can yield in highly impressive and novel forms of arts for the public.
Some also stress that while artists work without any given legislation by the government, sometimes they can end up crossing some religious and cultural boundaries that can wreak havoc in the society and bring about great dislike for them. For example, in 2016 Hisham Ali painted nude models for his project name' Man and earth' which received great criticism in pakistan as he had overstepped some basic moral principles. hence , introducing boundaries can outline practice for artists and keep their careers healthy.
Though having a set of rules can regulate the ways artists carry out their work and help keep them on track , i sternly belief art is unbounded; An artist can best flourish when given the perfect medium to do so. Putting them under restrictions will only cause them to flee from their fields and become less imaginative. hence , art should be promoted raw and allowed to thrive freely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05573770492 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59422611038 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655737704918 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2100165566 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150937663731 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486212304647 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341942367278 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909510170742 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338311778453 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.