Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music, film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no public or government restrictions on what they do.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give your reasons with own knowledge and give examples.
Government should not proscription on creative artists, who should express their creativity freely in front of public. In my opinion, up to certain steps, i agree to give allowance for express idea in terms of movie, film etc. However, sometimes it has to disfamiliar as well.
Today, In progressive Generation whole peoples are free of mind so artist can show his abilities against audience. Film maker should have create a films to protect society. In other example, Book writer should be able to describe reality and friendly opinion without permission of national authorities so that everyone can know about real story. In current decade, when creative artists give them suggestion on sensitive case by books, movies etc. Afterward government have deducted that portion from species.
Besides this, If Government should gave all permission then non social creatures can lift advantages of this freedom. For Example, director releases adult movies based on artificial story ahead of societies. Nevertheless, some Maternal can do that things in reality. Same things Happened when the director produce thieves’ story then real thief can get idea. Other Instance shows that honey Singh, a singer, who sang a adult song. It is not really help to improve civilization. Secondly, the artist should not go against any culture and costume of a country. In this certain field, government can limit the practice of an artist.
As per above discussion, we can conclude that occasionally, it will mitigate misdeeds, whenever it can take in positive manner. Besides that all peoples should up voice against, whom creativity is ruthless.
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.286666666667 0.247107183377 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.126666666667 0.155533422707 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0766666666667 0.0946595960268 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0533333333333 0.0501214627716 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.03 0.0437548338989 69% => OK
Prepositions: 0.14 0.122226691241 115% => OK
Participles: 0.00666666666667 0.0403226058552 17% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.74620261036 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.02 0.0326793684256 61% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0566666666667 0.0861772015684 66% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0533333333333 0.021408717616 249% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0166666666667 0.011925033212 140% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1637.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 259.0 316.048096192 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.32046332046 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.432432432432 0.374742101984 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.335907335907 0.28420135186 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.235521235521 0.203846283523 116% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123552123552 0.137316102897 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74620261036 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.037074148 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671814671815 0.56093040696 120% => OK
Word variations: 80.3744872411 60.7387585426 132% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.3888888889 20.7743622355 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7074299039 49.517814964 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9444444444 127.492653851 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3888888889 20.7743622355 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.722222222222 0.814263465372 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 47.9796224796 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 2.06349206349 1.69124875643 122% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223719872163 0.332605444948 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0486167094379 0.102741220458 47% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0503850214831 0.0668466124924 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.407573105446 0.534860350844 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.143522296031 0.148594505496 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07248219721 0.134430193775 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611940944709 0.0742795772207 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.224370274363 0.324371583561 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0360995437501 0.0638462369009 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148496534374 0.228012699653 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840571184566 0.058150111329 145% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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