Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their ideas (in words, pictures, music, film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no public or government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Societies with heritage in arts have long been considered culturally sophisticated and advanced as arts and sculptures are the pride of a nation. Some people opine that arts that are created by artists should not be restricted by public or higher authorities and they must be free to express their thoughts throughout their paintings. According to my point of view, freedom should be given but not for those arts that might bring negative thinking.
Admittedly, art brings quality into one’s life as it does not provide recognition to the artist but also the art skills that make the person able to be a professional artist by commercializing their sculptures and paintings. Everyone has different kinds of skills, with those abilities one can earn bread and butter in the future period. That is why, art-lovers should be free to express their ideas via their painting, sculptures, music and literature. To be more specific, research has shown that arts affect the fundamental sense of self painting and other arts and thus is a repository of a society’s collective memory. Secondly. In changing opinions, experiences and prevailing trends in society, artists have a large contribution as many bad evils are there in society which ruins the environment of a community and even of a country as a whole. For example, the Dowery system, Female feticide etcetera. Artists can bring awareness through their paintings literature, music that may divert the minds of people towards respect for girls. As a consequence, society will become a better place to live and appreciation for arts would be increased by the majority of people.
However, sometimes it can lead to provocation in the society as if artists would be free to act in any way then they would use illegal ways to get name and fame even by disregarding the human values and norms of the society. For example, allowing completely to present anything in front of the public will be affecting the ambience in the community. A few movies and songs are made that sometimes hurt people as those are knowingly made to provoke people against anyone which put negative impacts on society. Hence, Government should impose a ban on these kinds of movies that are comprised of abusing people, hurts the sentiments of people.
To conclude, although artists entertain people with their talent in terms of singing, dancing, music and writing yet I believe that they should be banned in case of any art that is provoking people to do some bad things. Also, young ones are under the influence of these arts so, artists should make only those arts that include a good message for the young generation especially.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2216.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 444.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99099099099 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72859221683 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 696.6 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.4632160943 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.352941176 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1176470588 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235611076944 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787234647548 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752732321802 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160370627148 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422912550176 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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