Crime nearly is always related to the environment in which it occurs. For this reason, international laws and international law courts are unrealistic and will not succeed in reducing crime levels in different countries. Discuss.
An offense is virtually related to surroundings, which effects people. Thus, international law courts are not sure about future possibilities of crime levels, and they do not try to decrease these rates in different nations.
On the one hand, this position is realistic and has certain states that is considered preferable. Environment is a genuine factor where persons try to represent different forms from showing power to receiving respect. People affected by surroundings and that plays important role in altering their personality. However, if the government tries to intervene into private lives of people and make an effort to chase particular persons or suspects whose guilt is not proven, it can end in unacceptable circumstances. Massive strikes and chaos can start, as a result, accidental deaths of people. In addition, it may lead to the emergence of dispute in the authorities, and arguments about the government’s proper functioning.
On the other hand, ignoring this situation can be one of the major error that further can deteriorate the situation in the country. The government should attempt to prevent the appearance of crime, which is influenced by the environment. It should be mention that misdeeds have many different forms such as robbery, contraband, kidnapping, or terrorism. Some of them do not touch people’s lives, some hurt in a huge scale. For instance, terrorism is a type of crime, which covers burglarizing, intimidating, violating, or even killing people. In addition, currently, this situation can bring more consequences such as pillage or panic, due to highly developed mass media. Therefore, the authority has to undertake purposeful decisions to reduce crime rates.
Violence as itself has severe consequences, which can be abolished by the government when level of criminality in country decrease. Therefore, governmental laws and courts should try to prevent crime level in order to avoid the dreadful effects that can influence the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'mentioned'?
Suggestion: mentioned
...uenced by the environment. It should be mention that misdeeds have many different forms...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...It should be mention that misdeeds have many different forms such as robbery, contraband, kidn...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'as to', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'such as', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.265536723164 0.247107183377 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.152542372881 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0847457627119 0.0946595960268 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0367231638418 0.0501214627716 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0197740112994 0.0437548338989 45% => OK
Prepositions: 0.104519774011 0.122226691241 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0367231638418 0.0403226058552 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.11032151006 2.80594681477 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0367231638418 0.0326793684256 112% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0819209039548 0.0861772015684 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0310734463277 0.021408717616 145% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0254237288136 0.011925033212 213% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1999.0 1933.35771543 103% => OK
No of words: 310.0 316.048096192 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.44838709677 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.41935483871 0.374742101984 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.335483870968 0.28420135186 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.248387096774 0.203846283523 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.2 0.137316102897 146% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11032151006 2.80594681477 111% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.037074148 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 67.2492251024 60.7387585426 111% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.2352941176 20.7743622355 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7727838812 49.517814964 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.588235294 127.492653851 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7743622355 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.705882352941 0.814263465372 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 51.7836812144 49.1944974215 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.94594594595 1.69124875643 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381148682383 0.332605444948 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0764296484429 0.102741220458 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0743814297874 0.0668466124924 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.462769650823 0.534860350844 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.16106327775 0.148594505496 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133474770556 0.134430193775 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07364561684 0.0742795772207 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.360377577743 0.324371583561 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0719388245259 0.0638462369009 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26958673585 0.228012699653 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512584077889 0.058150111329 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.68436873747 35% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 2.5751503006 349% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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