Describe a book that you recently read

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Describe a book that you recently read

I have a friend who likes reading. One of the time she showed me a certain book in your library and she said that is her favorite book. She also said that is was the second part of the most famous Adventures of Huckleberry Finn written by Mark Twain.

Home interesting was it! It was a wonderful book. The book was full of adventures. The main character was Huckleberry Finn who was a poor English boy whose father was a third class drunkard. This father wanted to get his son's fortune which he get previously in yet another adventure with Tom Sawyer, his friend. So Finn runs away from the custod...

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Average: 7.4 (21 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: VBZ_VBD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...s her favorite book. She also said that is was the second part of the most famous ...
^^
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...er favorite book. She also said that is was the second part of the most famous Adve...
^^^
Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...wanted to get his sons fortune which he get previously in yet another adventure wit...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, second, so, third, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46992481203 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31129641762 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8375152599 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.45 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.3 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.45 7.06120827912 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0929487151145 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334943654762 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484441334366 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636797544281 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525987775083 0.056905535591 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 13.0946893788 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 50.2224549098 167% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 11.3001002004 42% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 12.4159519038 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.06 8.58950901804 71% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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