In developing countries, children in rural communities have less access to education. Some people think that the problem can be solved by providing more schools and teachers while others think that the problem can be solved by proving computers and Internet access. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
It is true that children, particularly those in rural regions of developing nations, being the underprivileged to obtain proper education, could be distributed more schools and teachers to deal with this current circumstance. However, some people argue that giving opportunities to access computers and the Internet may be a better choice. From my perspective, benefits of mentors and learning facilities such as schools ought to eclipse values of computers and Internet access.
On the one hand, availability of the Internet and computers could promote the ability of independent learning in remote areas. Students have more chances to enhance their computing skills and independent study via the Internet. For example, they could know how to write a formula in the excel work sheet by watching excel learning YouTube channels. Furthermore, the Internet has a variety of infinite learning resources which could explain any struggling questions. Dealing with Mathematics clearly a typical example of Internet usage as precise solutions and explanations will be provided.
On the other hand, instructors like teachers and schools have served education in modern society for many years. They create basis of educational conditions and facilities for learners to achieve in-depth knowledge. Roles of teachers and lecturers could not be replaced because they help students to fully understand any difficult problems as well as introduce reliable and accurate sources to fix their issues. By way of illustration, although the Internet has massive amount of resources, students may not know which useful information to collect. This is the time when teachers play their indispensable parts in order to support students into correct directions.
In conclusion, in spite of beneficial effects of accessing the Internet and computers, I believe that roles of teachers and schools cannot be refused in any base of education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ey could know how to write a formula in the excel work sheet by watching excel learning Y...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot be refused in any base of education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in spite of, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57337883959 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98291953355 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60409556314 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6805555004 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.642857143 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199003474993 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654278072885 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063302054345 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130879701743 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726678855987 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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