Different types of environmental pollution seem to be affecting an increasing number of people in the world. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what solutions do you suggest?
In this modern society, environmental-related issues have confronted the general public. It undeniable that this problem seems to have adverse impact on an increasing number of citizens around the world. In this essay I will discuss the causes and solution to this issue.
One of the biggest threats faces us more regular than ever is probably pollution, namely air pollution, soil pollution and water pollution and this problem is can be attributed by numerous reasons. First of all, due to the industrialisation and over-urbanisation, the amount of carbon footprint emitted from factories and private transport will be one of the main perspectives contributes to this detrimental situation. For instance, because of the fact that there are more and more people move to metropolitan cities such as Hanoi, the air quality continues to deteriorate. Furthermore, as factories keep spring up, their toxic waste empty into the rivers and lakes will eventually contaminate the water. Secondly, the use of non-biodegradable products like nylon and plastic not only pollute the soil because of their long-term stability but also affect the water quality, all of these will eventually affect long-term health problems of every animal, especially human.
In order to remedy the situation, concerted efforts need to be taken. First and foremost, it is extremely important to raise people’s awareness of the hazard impacts of pollution on the Earth. Especially, we need to educate children from an early age, such as in primary or secondary schools about environment issues. It is known to be crucial that the government should adopt and enforce strict laws and regulations against environmentally harmful activities. One more thing that each individual can do is to buy products with less packaging or made from recycled materials and to reuse appropriate types of plastic.
All things considered, in my opinion, if each citizen of the society stop their destructive behaviour, the ecological strain and burden on Earth can be relieved.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ntal-related issues have confronted the general public. It undeniable that this problem seems ...
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Line 2, column 434, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...is detrimental situation. For instance, because of the fact that there are more and more people move to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37617554859 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15268563226 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633228840125 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7858565735 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207485857219 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646824788942 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555679772463 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113633161873 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748587651383 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.