Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be te responsibility of teachers, while others think that it is the role of parents.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Discipline is considered to be a major issue in nowadays schools, and it is increasing with time, for which some people suggest that it is teacher’s responsibility to maintain discipline in young generation, while other thought that parents can play a major role in children’s behavior. In my opinion both have equal role and responsibility.
Children spent most of its time in homes and both father and mother can play an important role in the character building of a child, and a child learnt those things which were taught by their parents to him/her, for example, if parents tell to their childrens how to talk with the elders, he/she will follow them from the very beginning,and will follow it through out their life, so parents have a major role in their character and discipline building.
On the other hand, teachers prepare their students for the challenges of modern world, because they spent the most important and learning period of their life with their teachers. So anything which were asked by the teachers to obey are follow, the students will follow them. For example, if the teacher told them about the dangerous effects of smoking on health, they will follow them and will thought a lot about these effects before smoking.
In my opinion, both parents and teachers have equal role in maintaining discipline among children in schools of modern world, with their cooperation and coordination with each other these problems of discipline can b solved very easily.
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Essay evaluation report
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Sentence: Children spent most of its time in homes and both father and mother can play an important role in the character building of a child, and a child learnt those things which were taught by their parents to him/her, for example, if parents tell to their childrens how to talk with the elders, he/she will follow them from the very beginning,and will follow it through out their life, so parents have a major role in their character and discipline building.
Error: childrens Suggestion: children
flaws:
No. of Words: 250 350 //need more content
No. of Different Words: 124 200 //don't repeat words
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better to have 5 paragraphs, try this pattern to have more content:
paragraph 1: introduction. Your ideas/opinions here.
paragraph 2: Admittedly, there are some advantages of side A. First, ... Second, ...
paragraph 3: However, still I support side B. reason 1 + why reason 1 + example for reason 1 + a small conclusion for reason 1.
paragraph 4: In addition, reason 2 + why reason 2 + example for reason 2+ a small conclusion for reason 2.
paragraph 5: conclusion.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 250 350
No. of Characters: 1205 1500
No. of Different Words: 124 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.976 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.82 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.519 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 80 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 61 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 35.714 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 22.352 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.457 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.743 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.185 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...pline is considered to be a major issue in nowadays schools, and it is increasing with time...
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le in the character building of a child, and a child learnt those things which we...
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Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...will follow them from the very beginning,and will follow it through out their life, ...
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Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...m the very beginning,and will follow it through out their life, so parents have a major rol...
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Line 5, column 396, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
... health, they will follow them and will thought a lot about these effects before smokin...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258064516129 0.247107183377 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.125448028674 0.155533422707 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0752688172043 0.0946595960268 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0143369175627 0.0501214627716 29% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0716845878136 0.0437548338989 164% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.15770609319 0.122226691241 129% => OK
Participles: 0.0250896057348 0.0403226058552 62% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74038531632 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0215053763441 0.0326793684256 66% => OK
Particles: 0.00358422939068 0.00163938923432 219% => OK
Determiners: 0.089605734767 0.0861772015684 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0286738351254 0.021408717616 134% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0143369175627 0.011925033212 120% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1498.0 1933.35771543 77% => OK
No of words: 247.0 316.048096192 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.06477732794 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20517956788 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.344129554656 0.374742101984 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.267206477733 0.28420135186 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182186234818 0.203846283523 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.105263157895 0.137316102897 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74038531632 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.037074148 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514170040486 0.56093040696 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.332712394 60.7387585426 80% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0891783567 44% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 35.2857142857 20.7743622355 170% => OK
Sentence length SD: 123.918669839 49.517814964 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 214.0 127.492653851 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.2857142857 20.7743622355 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.814263465372 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 62.006362059 49.1944974215 126% => OK
Elegance: 2.08474576271 1.69124875643 123% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348330532314 0.332605444948 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.203533800186 0.102741220458 198% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0819323402362 0.0668466124924 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.748164886251 0.534860350844 140% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.213420774068 0.148594505496 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178491942036 0.134430193775 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989757315565 0.0742795772207 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.265872499355 0.324371583561 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0936320704392 0.0638462369009 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242049877343 0.228012699653 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964870226127 0.058150111329 166% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 10.4468937876 57% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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