Discrimination against old workers be made illegal or not? give you opinion?
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about "Discrimination against old workers be made illegal or not". While it is possible claim that, talented persons can acheive anything but it'll not depend on the age and the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay, I shall explain in my point of view how discrimination should me be done by analysing both sides of the essay.
There are several reasons why discrimination againt old employees should be illegal. One of them is, though old employees are having talent and logical thinking on given tasks, company can't terminate them because of their age. It should also be taken into consideration that older worker are having much experience and can solve the tasks in different manners.
The people who argue for discrimination against old workers be made illegal because they have to give chance for a new young emoployee. Firstly, it is claimed that a person who has talent can solve problems but it is not depended on age and may be young employees can come up with new idea and good analysing skills but company can't trust anyone without experience.
In my point of view, older workers who can't work properly due to eye sight or health issues company can discriminate them according to their policy but company should appoint old employees to a particular team of new employees and they may guide new workers so that the outcome will be profitable to the compay a well as employees.
To conclude, discrimination against old workers should be made illegal.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...a and good analysing skills but company cant trust anyone without experience. In ...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...r workers who cant work properly due to eye sight or health issues company can discrimina...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.250883392226 0.247107183377 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.166077738516 0.155533422707 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102473498233 0.0946595960268 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0318021201413 0.0501214627716 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0530035335689 0.0437548338989 121% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116607773852 0.122226691241 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0424028268551 0.0403226058552 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85416729121 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0212014134276 0.0326793684256 65% => OK
Particles: 0.00353356890459 0.00163938923432 216% => OK
Determiners: 0.0565371024735 0.0861772015684 66% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0494699646643 0.021408717616 231% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.017667844523 0.011925033212 148% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1548.0 1933.35771543 80% => OK
No of words: 259.0 316.048096192 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97683397683 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.362934362934 0.374742101984 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.258687258687 0.28420135186 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.150579150579 0.203846283523 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104247104247 0.137316102897 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85416729121 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.037074148 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57528957529 0.56093040696 103% => OK
Word variations: 58.5843024223 60.7387585426 96% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0891783567 62% => OK
Sentence length: 25.9 20.7743622355 125% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.519298095 49.517814964 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.8 127.492653851 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.7743622355 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9 0.814263465372 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 51.7687258687 49.1944974215 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.6338028169 1.69124875643 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287952044223 0.332605444948 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110073785454 0.102741220458 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0682523455552 0.0668466124924 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.642116448287 0.534860350844 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.198074268834 0.148594505496 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165692349063 0.134430193775 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160055360864 0.0742795772207 215% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.22597278832 0.324371583561 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0226595938782 0.0638462369009 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223661639637 0.228012699653 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137366012441 0.058150111329 236% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 10.4468937876 57% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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