DO YOU THINK CONSUMER SHOULD AVOID OVER PACKED PRODUCTS OR IT IS RESPONSIBILITY OF PRODUCER TO AVOID EXTRA PACKAGING OF PRODUCTS?” GIVE YOUR VIEWS OR ANY RELEVANT EXAMPLE WITH YOUR OWN EXPERIENCE.
Everything that we do today or has been doing has both the negative and positive sides to it. The packaging of a product, though looks like a small thing, as well has two sides attached to it. Whether a product is for consumption or utility, comes with a packaging large or small. The packing plays a pivotal role to make a product reach to the end consumer in the right way.
The ultimate need and responsibility of packaging should be the producer because they are the one who are doing this action. The over packing has a negative impact on the environment which is much larger than it’s advantages. To begin with the environmental impact, the high use of plastic material to make a product look bigger than the actual size is detrimental to nature. Plastic’s in any form takes centuries before they degrade into the soil. If made to burn, they emit several toxic gasses which cause damage to the humans and environment alike.
Having said that, I see that at times it becomes a requirement to over package a product for various reasons. The reasons being, protecting the product from getting infested with bacteria’s which can cause several diseases to humans. Also to add longer shelf life for a product or safer transportation to the end consumer channels such supermarkets or retail shops.
In the end, I would like to conclude that over packing of a product should depend on the need based rather than doing so for the sake of marketing. This is where the producer should consider the impact on the environment and mankind while deciding on the packaging of a product.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... are the one who are doing this action. The over packing has a negative impact on t...
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Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...h can cause several diseases to humans. Also to add longer shelf life for a product ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.251677852349 0.268076937826 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.154362416107 0.116061578633 133% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0771812080537 0.0759168565197 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0234899328859 0.0366838410393 64% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0302013422819 0.0131127313244 230% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124161073826 0.155750635184 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0436241610738 0.0379272487307 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65195611682 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0469798657718 0.0210936926555 223% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.144295302013 0.0948980150116 152% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0167785234899 0.00437022459523 384% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0167785234899 0.00967000014798 174% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1588.0 1161.00487805 137% => OK
No of words: 276.0 196.9 140% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75362318841 5.90752243213 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.73763899035 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.337110787985 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246376811594 0.247514529752 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.148550724638 0.171178102325 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0760869565217 0.112407865282 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65195611682 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 106.607317073 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56884057971 0.546246751206 104% => OK
Word variations: 58.7587111118 49.3433353143 119% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 8.93414634146 157% => OK
Sentence length: 19.7142857143 23.0094962315 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.927989755 42.9750493124 51% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.428571429 135.714022679 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 23.0094962315 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.689975730869 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 44.3519668737 47.7609492067 93% => OK
Elegance: 2.01612903226 2.94281807926 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165455838313 0.418131533498 40% => More coherence wanted between essay topic and essay body.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109781966202 0.181151798455 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0710876867903 0.0850326197045 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.578109916323 0.706616315825 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.123415086361 0.157042692854 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815984973736 0.228904883108 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385095060793 0.108899403657 35% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.32198977904 0.367819155151 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0616937663893 0.0812612215331 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126276858941 0.316326947829 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244874093684 0.0921553760075 27% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.14146341463 350% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 0.956097560976 209% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 7.1512195122 154% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.0 Out of 9