Do you think how important it is for people to want success in life ? Is ambition a positive or negative characteristic?
We are living in a competitive world where success is desired by the majority of people. From my own perspective, it is undoubtedly necessary and important for people to have this kind of desire. Ambition, however, although brings potential dangers, is the driving force in fulfilling the desire.
The longing for success is the basis to achieve success. I believe that people who have made and who is going to made contributions to human society all have a strong desire for success -- strong enough to support them to get over difficulties and barriers on the way to success. Therefore, it is pivotal for people to have a strong desire to succeed, or to conquer, namely ambition.
Ambition is the driving force in the fulfillment of success, though being potentially hazardous. Admittedly, some people, driven by great ambition, try to succeed by hook or by crook. For example, students cheat in the exams only out of the ambition to get a higher score or to be praised by teachers. This is a disgrace for human beings. However, these people are usually the minority. The majority are motivated by ambitions to work hard and learn more skills to enhance their own capabilities or make themselves more competitive. It is the whole society in the end will benefit from it, for that all ambitious people are sparing no effort to make greater contributions in their own fields.
By way of conclusion, while ambition might bring disadvantages to humans, it is of vital importance and necessity for people to have ambition in this competitive world. Anyway, we can not image a world without competition and ambition.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...eople who have made and who is going to made contributions to human society all have...
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Discourse Markers used:
['anyway', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'for example', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.229508196721 0.247107183377 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.16393442623 0.155533422707 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0786885245902 0.0946595960268 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0459016393443 0.0501214627716 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0426229508197 0.0437548338989 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124590163934 0.122226691241 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0393442622951 0.0403226058552 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84979801683 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0590163934426 0.0326793684256 181% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0950819672131 0.0861772015684 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00983606557377 0.021408717616 46% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00983606557377 0.011925033212 82% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1619.0 1933.35771543 84% => OK
No of words: 273.0 316.048096192 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.9304029304 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.377289377289 0.374742101984 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.296703296703 0.28420135186 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.190476190476 0.203846283523 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.120879120879 0.137316102897 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84979801683 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.037074148 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534798534799 0.56093040696 95% => OK
Word variations: 53.0315812476 60.7387585426 87% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.2 20.7743622355 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3730870997 49.517814964 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.933333333 127.492653851 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7743622355 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.814263465372 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 47.8703296703 49.1944974215 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.55844155844 1.69124875643 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351446937469 0.332605444948 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.122865376052 0.102741220458 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0931301881945 0.0668466124924 139% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.544158597743 0.534860350844 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17752719981 0.148594505496 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156895618394 0.134430193775 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730356911141 0.0742795772207 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.33278791069 0.324371583561 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0511874776792 0.0638462369009 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257921372692 0.228012699653 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321307469462 0.058150111329 55% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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