Do you think how important it is for people to want success in life ? Is ambition a positive or negative characteristic?
We are living in a competitive world where success is desired by the majority of people. From my own perspective, it is undoubtedly necessary and important for people to have this kind of desire. Ambition, however, although brings potential hazards, is the driving force in fulfilling the desire.
On the one hand, the potential hazard of ambition is undoubted. Admittedly, some people, driven by great ambition, try to succeed by hook or by crook, which is a disgrace for human beings. For example, students cheat in the exams only out of the ambition to get a higher score or to be praised by teachers. However, these people are usually the minority.
Obviously, a stronger argument can be made for ambitions. The longing for success is the basis and driving force to achieve success. I believe that people who have made and who is going to make contributions to human society all have a strong desire for success -- strong enough to support them to overcome difficulties and barriers on the way to success. Therefore, it is pivotal for people to have a strong desire to succeed, or to conquer, namely ambition. Meanwhile, for the majority, ambitions are inner motivations to work harder and learn more skills to enhance their own capabilities or competitiveness. In fact, it is the whole society in the end will benefit from it, for that all ambitious people are sparing no effort to make greater contributions in their own fields.
By way of conclusion, while ambition might bring disadvantages to humans, it is the ultimate motivation for people pursuing success and for the progress of human beings as a whole. Anyway, we can not image a world without competition and ambition.
Discourse Markers used:
['anyway', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'for example', 'in fact', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239130434783 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.152173913043 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0807453416149 0.0946595960268 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0403726708075 0.0501214627716 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0372670807453 0.0437548338989 85% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121118012422 0.122226691241 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0372670807453 0.0403226058552 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87399051556 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0527950310559 0.0326793684256 162% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0962732919255 0.0861772015684 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0124223602484 0.021408717616 58% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0124223602484 0.011925033212 104% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1690.0 1933.35771543 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 316.048096192 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9298245614 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.382456140351 0.374742101984 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.298245614035 0.28420135186 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19298245614 0.203846283523 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115789473684 0.137316102897 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87399051556 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.037074148 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543859649123 0.56093040696 97% => OK
Word variations: 55.2366271155 60.7387585426 91% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7065589925 49.517814964 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 127.492653851 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 48.8245614035 49.1944974215 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.72972972973 1.69124875643 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341819253089 0.332605444948 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133101405355 0.102741220458 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.105453160649 0.0668466124924 158% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.542608363581 0.534860350844 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.150855164923 0.148594505496 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148951640129 0.134430193775 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744624744489 0.0742795772207 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.355218746037 0.324371583561 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0233957906815 0.0638462369009 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245002169806 0.228012699653 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485086228218 0.058150111329 83% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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