Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual people to address. We have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is to address it at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Climate change is a phenomenon affecting all people in all walks of life, from individual citizens to whole countries and huge multinational companies. Therefore, I disagree with the notion that the only way to address the environmental problems is at international level. I firmly believe that this colossal problem can only be handled if all individuals contribute; all governments take steps at national as well as international level.
Many steps can be taken at the national and international level. By imposing restrictions on emissions and by strictly monitoring waste disposal from factories, plants and businesses, governments would go a long way towards preventing climate change. Furthermore, governments around the world should come up with solutions to help prevent imminent environmental disaster. The Kyoto Agreement in the 1990s tried to create international consensus to limit industrial emissions of gases. Many countries which are part of United Nations signed this agreement according to which they would not allow any industries to be set up which emitted more than 5.2% carbon dioxide.
Some people claim that individual action is irrelevant in the face of massive, wide-scale prevention policies set and controlled by governments. On the other hand, it is also a fact that individual combined with governmental action can do a lot more to prevent climate change than if individual citizens were not involved. In a world of six billion people, if everyone stopped wasting water, disposed of their rubbish properly, started accepting recycled material and stopped succumbing to consumerism then it would go a long way in solving the problem of environment.
In conclusion, I suppose that individual citizens cannot sit back and say it is someone else’s responsibility to protect the environment; we must all play our part - individual citizens and governments at the national and international level.
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Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'i suppose', 'in conclusion', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255384615385 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.169230769231 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104615384615 0.0946595960268 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.04 0.0501214627716 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0307692307692 0.0437548338989 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123076923077 0.122226691241 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0553846153846 0.0403226058552 137% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.19271451461 2.80594681477 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0307692307692 0.0326793684256 94% => OK
Particles: 0.00615384615385 0.00163938923432 375% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0830769230769 0.0861772015684 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0276923076923 0.021408717616 129% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00923076923077 0.011925033212 77% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1932.0 1933.35771543 100% => OK
No of words: 298.0 316.048096192 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.48322147651 6.12580529183 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.426174496644 0.374742101984 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.352348993289 0.28420135186 124% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.268456375839 0.203846283523 132% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.191275167785 0.137316102897 139% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19271451461 2.80594681477 114% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.037074148 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573825503356 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 61.2399742251 60.7387585426 101% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 24.8333333333 20.7743622355 120% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0446427704 49.517814964 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.0 127.492653851 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7743622355 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 60.0682326622 49.1944974215 122% => OK
Elegance: 1.80769230769 1.69124875643 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436287264309 0.332605444948 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105102480963 0.102741220458 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0816069763659 0.0668466124924 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.53211857456 0.534860350844 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163105822124 0.148594505496 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185227914753 0.134430193775 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122807623023 0.0742795772207 165% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.264388101413 0.324371583561 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00460803934132 0.0638462369009 7% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294470904603 0.228012699653 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385156130047 0.058150111329 66% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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