Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. [ATTENTION: This answer got a 4.0 in IELTS.]
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Languages, I firmly believe, play an essential role in every modern society, either developing countries or developed ones. The question, however, is whether disappearing a number of languages are not crucial issues because make individual’s life much easier or not. Despite popular belief, I am, to a huge extent, an advocate of the former approach.
Granted, languages, from the practical view point, are the rudimentary part of every culture which make the world more colorful and enjoyable. Also, dying several languages can put an end on this beautiful and attractive cultures and traditions, hence a bulk of population lose their nationality and civilization. Furthermore, if one language such as English or French become a first language of the most countries in the world, the indigenous people of that country proud themselves and feel they are more valuable in comparison with other nationalities. Therefore, if we want to have a one language as an global one we should invent the new language which is not related to any nation.
On the other hand, nevertheless, having the global language in all over the globe positively affect communication since all people easily contact with each other. For instance we can vast our international trades, continue our education or find appropriate occupation, while we do not need to participate to any language exams such as TOEFL or IELTS. Moreover, from the financial viewpoint, fellows have to dedicate a huge amount of money in order to acquire foreign language, admittedly they have to spent a bulk of time on studying as well, so by this advance we can save our money and time and allocate them to some activities which make our time more pleasant.
All things considered, although demolishing some languages negatively influence some nations and cultures, I wholeheartedly contend that the merits of it outweigh and outnumber its drawback, particularly in terms of communication and financial points.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 604, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27070063694 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06724935095 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617834394904 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.55683342 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.454545455 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5454545455 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1818181818 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20465536009 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700266885039 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369273204516 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107970688695 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412794419357 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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