Everyone should be vegeterians because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, switching to consuming vegetarian foods in community has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although this tendency appears plausible to some extent, people should not completely neglect animal-based foods.
There are a variety of compelling reasons why people should become vegetarians. First, since there are a number of kinds of meat-deficient foods such as peas and fruits provide sufficient nutrients and vitamins for people, they do not need to consume meat anymore. For example, beans and potatoes are the most two favoured dishes which are rich in vitamins and calories by people in England, making consumers not be much reliant on meat products. Second, if more people switch to eating meatless products, fewer animals will be slaughtered. In fact, millions of domestic animals such as chickens, cows, and pigs have been killed annually to meet the demands of citizens about food, which implies that becoming vegetarians is not only moral but also humane.
Nonetheless, it is widely believed that such trend is not appropriate for everyone. One of the reasons is that in order to have comprehensive development in mentality and physique, children are suggested to consume meat often. In other words, meat contains nutrients that help children develop bones and muscles, which is of great contribution to kids’ growing process. Furthermore, athletes are the ones consuming meat-based products more than anyone. In fact, as sport takers have to undergo intensive trainings and competitions, proteins in meat such as pork or beef help them strengthen muscles and recover injuries more quickly than any vitamins in fruits or vegetables do.
In conclusion, although advocates of the trend that people should become vegetarians is beneficial may indicate some merits, it is not advisable for a majority of people as a whole. By choosing the fresh ingredients of either meat or vegetarian foods, consumers will make the best decision for improving their health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, nonetheless, second, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37142857143 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82355209976 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7594418489 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.857142857 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152598180612 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491036261933 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425052370935 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805924119504 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536455614214 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.