Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that letting their diets totally rely on vegetable is enough for all residents to have a healthy life. While not disavowing its positive impacts on humans, I opine that becoming vegetarians should not be proposed to the whole population.
On the one hand, not only is solely eating vegetables witnessed to be effective preventive medicines but also recognized to be advantageous for illness’ eradication. Indeed, vegetable is scientifically proved to efficiently build up the immune system, which plays a critical role in protecting humans from potential ailments. This is the reason for which vegetarians are observed better deal with the outbreak of Ebola epidemic than carnivorous ones, according to a recent study. Another benefit stems from the tackle of life-threatening diseases, in which a diet high in fiber can provide an excessive load of nutrition that one high in fat and protein cannot give. For example, a research has indicated that eating blueberry on a daily basis will equip people with flavonoid, an antioxidant that can prevent them from Alzheimer, cardiovascular diseases or even cancer. Hence, it is safe to say that the more regularly people eat vegetable, the less likely they need to take medicines, and suffer from their side effects.
On the other hand, it seems to me that becoming vegetarians should not be recommended for everyone due to several reasons. From a health perspective, although its strengths in promoting health are undeniable, vegetable is still not renowned as rich in calories. Therefore, if people, especially youngster, are provided with meals full of vegetable, its lack of protein or fat will be unable to meet their energy needs, which, as a consequence, leads to their inadequate long-term physical development. From an economic perspective, it is obvious that sales of meat would significantly decline when all residents switched to eat vegetable only. Consequently, this tendency would be detrimental to the agriculture sector, since it puts households living on raising cattle to the verge of losing their business.
In brief, I strongly believe that it is inappropriate to encourage all residents to be vegetarians despite the benefits brought about by vegetable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in brief, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3615819209 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09240373092 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61581920904 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.5975974287 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.571428571 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126075738268 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447606057524 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444876981768 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807721595227 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437010804828 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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