"Failure is proof that the desire wasn't strong enough."
To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer.
In the deep of human creature, there was a primordial inclination that can trigger people to do something, that may be called a desire. Some probe quote that the quality of desire infiltrates the goal of the wisher. That argument sincerely contains wide areas to discuss and I supposedly want to give any commentaries briefly.
As I said before that people will not do something if he does not has any ambition that can spark a motivation due to is a very essence of human's inclination. People can successfully be rich if he has an extraordinary greed about money. However, some patient group may argue that uncontrolled greed may lead to declining moral value. As result of money motivation, businessman acts whatever they want as long as his desire can be reached. From this Issue suggest that desire indeed can lead success but we cannot deny the bad side of it.
As above paragraph, the unexpected effect can be avoided if the wisher can control their ambition. That suggestion while in others occasion does not prevent us to not desire about something, but it is good if we have ambition as long as we can control it. Therefore, a businessman can actually become a wise billionaire without a spirit of money instead, but with the spirit of how he can help to reduce others' poverty situation. Those two different ambition create a distinctive action. With money ambition, the riches may only aware of a benefit in return, but with the good deed desire to help each other, he may not only succeed by himself but also give access to a poor person becomes prosperous.
Above all, I want to say that the quality of ambition indeed not just give an effect on failure or reverse it, but it can impact to the validity of action. People may act differently if they have a distinctive spirit even though the have same goal.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'quotes'.
Suggestion: quotes
...that may be called a desire. Some probe quote that the quality of desire infiltrates ...
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Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: have
...le will not do something if he does not has any ambition that can spark a motivatio...
^^^
Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...le will not do something if he does not has any ambition that can spark a motivatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, briefly, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, as to, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67601246106 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65357297245 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542056074766 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4977375555 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.066666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0645320088599 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0228521854318 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0205160950015 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0430192853008 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00687394891839 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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