Fashion trend are difficult to follow. Some people think that they primarily exist fust to sell clothes so we should not follow them. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?
Over the past few decades, fashion has changed significantly in many countries around the word. While some people think that fashion designer’s profit motive is the main source produces these trends, I personally believe that fashion is far more than that, and people should pay attention to these changes.
It is indispensable that fashion is a way to interpret traditions, social values and ways of life during period of time in a particular place, and fashion trends reflect the changes and innovations in that society. For example, during the Middle Ages, women covered almost parts of their body in public place because sexual freedom was extremely repressed and people were extremely religious, whereas today in Europe, women are free from many restrictions on clothing. Therefore, it is not exaggerate to say that fashion is the outcome of culture and the study of fashion is actually the research into the culture evolution of human beings.
There are numerous reasons why people should follow the fashion trends but in this brief essay I will mention one that is fashion’s function in the modern age. The function of clothing nowadays is not just keep warm; the way people dress also demonstrate their personalities, professions and attitudes. Having a up to date fashion could help people to choose right look that shows their respect to others and reflects their personality traits better because designers display individualism in their work so as to inspire people to be creative in finding their own styles.
In conclusion, apart from aforementioned features above, I reaffirm that the fast-changing trends in clothing is far from catering for appetite of profits, and people should follow these changes
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
..., social values and ways of life during period of time in a particular place, and fashion tren...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'exaggerated'.
Suggestion: exaggerated
...tions on clothing. Therefore, it is not exaggerate to say that fashion is the outcome of c...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ties, professions and attitudes. Having a up to date fashion could help people to...
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Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...ate fashion could help people to choose right look that shows their respect to others...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ers display individualism in their work so as to inspire people to be creative in findin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, so, therefore, whereas, while, apart from, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27797833935 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.808362628 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606498194946 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.2423436015 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.444444444 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7777777778 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8888888889 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198270046418 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814120155035 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577305016636 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118576248558 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032904895117 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.