Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your answer with examples and relevant evidence.
This essay shows my side on the matter regarding the emphasis of fatherhood as much as motherhood. I agree that fatherhood should also be emphasized as it takes two to tango. It takes a mother and a father to create a baby and it also takes both of them to nurture a child. We cannot deduct the idea that the father nowadays can also do some of the things that mothers can do. I only disagree on the thought that only one of them, specifically the women responsible alone on decision making about this matter.
I strongly agree that we should give light on fatherhood as they are also part of a child's creation and upbringing. I believe that both the mother and father should be given a chance to decide as a team wether or not to have babies and how to raise them. They are called couple, married or not, they are still a couple which means there is two of them on decision making. Throughout the history of mankind, there was a time that men are known to be the head of the family, the provider and the first one who decides which is good for the family. As years goes by, the society changes their outlook on this matter. Gone are the ideas of patriarchal family wherein the father leads the family, the new trend is democracy. Equality on mother and father when it comes to the family. In our century, the mothers are no longer expected to stay at home and become housewives, neither are the father expected to work all the time to provide for the family alone. In this era, the mother and father take turns in working and nurturing the family. Some fathers may lack on skills and knowledge for changing of baby's diaper but I can say that they can compromise or learn how to do it.
As a woman, motherhood can be a stuggle and achievement. We all know that women carries the baby for 9 months, keeps the baby healthy, flights the morning sickness, and expels the baby to the outside world. Motherhood does not end there. There are nurturing, parent-teachers meeting and maintaining the household. Mothers are amazing but so does the fathers out there. As the mother carries the baby, the father took care of the mother. When the baby is out, the mother takes a nap and the father takes over. I disagree on the matter that only mothers or women can decide when it comes on starting a family. As they said, two heads is better than one.
To sum it up, the father is alongside the mother throughout the way as they build their family. I am very supportive on giving the fathers a salute and acknowledging their efforts and perception on their child's growth and development. This is the reason why we still need to celebrate father's day as much as we celebrate mother's day. Fatherhood ought to be celebrated as much. Moreover, there would be no babies without a father and a mother to begin with. I promote equality on both sides wether they're still together or not, I believe that both the mother and he father can find a common ground when it comes to deciding on having a baby and on it's upbringing. We both know that both of them wants only what's best for the baby. As long as it is good for the baby, this should not be done by mother alone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 338, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ea that the father nowadays can also do some of the things that mothers can do. I only disa...
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Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rt of a childs creation and upbringing. I believe that both the mother and father...
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Line 3, column 620, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...nges their outlook on this matter. Gone are the ideas of patriarchal family wherein...
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Line 7, column 485, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sides'' or 'side's'?
Suggestion: sides'; side's
... begin with. I promote equality on both sides wether theyre still together or not, I ...
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Line 7, column 498, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...I promote equality on both sides wether theyre still together or not, I believe that b...
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Line 7, column 566, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'fathers'.
Suggestion: fathers
..., I believe that both the mother and he father can find a common ground when it comes ...
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Line 7, column 706, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
... both know that both of them wants only whats best for the baby. As long as it is goo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 28.0 10.4138276553 269% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 61.0 24.0651302605 253% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2572.0 1615.20841683 159% => OK
No of words: 584.0 315.596192385 185% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40410958904 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91590194646 4.20363070211 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38002611351 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 176.041082164 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.428082191781 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 810.0 506.74238477 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 5.43587174349 313% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 16.0721442886 199% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0761487971 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.375 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4375 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217473731152 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060281857761 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487788999136 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147767517175 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339950180813 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.