The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as
many as 29 million vehicles on British roads.
Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws
introduced to control car ownership and use.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this multicultural world of diversity and changes,transport plays a very important role in people‘s daily lives. No matter we go the work or travel by the car, it seems that the number of transport vehicles has significantly risen in the last few decades.
The first car appeared in Britain in 1888. By the next century, more than 29 million cars have already been on the British roads, polluting the environment and our surrounding. The situation is the same with other European and world‘s countries, so the public sector has to work on transport reforms in order to make it more secure and distinctive.
In my opinion, every country, as well as Britain, should consider alternative forms of transport. Global action in this field is highly requested and all of us should join forces for legal changes in this field. One of the useful suggestions could be control of people who owns more than one car or transport vehicle at all. From the other side, many countries have already introduced combined possibilities for car driver according to the plate numbers.
As we all know that world‘s nation becomes more inactive and life busier, we should take action and encourage law makers to boost bicycle transport as well as ecological means of transport. The resolution as this has already given good result in Amsterdam where most of the citizens use bicycles on a daily basis.
However,the public sector must start to deliberate on this topic seriously. It wouldn‘t be useful only for Britain but also for the whole world‘s population.
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More content wanted. Look:
No of words: 259.0 316.048096192 82% => More content wanted.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , transport
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'as to', 'as well as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263157894737 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.115789473684 0.155533422707 74% => OK
Adjectives: 0.112280701754 0.0946595960268 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0526315789474 0.0501214627716 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0315789473684 0.0437548338989 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140350877193 0.122226691241 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0280701754386 0.0403226058552 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8234315075 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0175438596491 0.0326793684256 54% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.105263157895 0.0861772015684 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0175438596491 0.021408717616 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00701754385965 0.011925033212 59% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1556.0 1933.35771543 80% => OK
No of words: 259.0 316.048096192 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.00772200772 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355212355212 0.374742101984 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.250965250965 0.28420135186 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.196911196911 0.203846283523 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142857142857 0.137316102897 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8234315075 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.037074148 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625482625483 0.56093040696 112% => OK
Word variations: 68.5470391134 60.7387585426 113% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 19.9230769231 20.7743622355 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7417258458 49.517814964 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.692307692 127.492653851 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7743622355 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.769230769231 0.814263465372 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 45.0196020196 49.1944974215 92% => OK
Elegance: 2.15789473684 1.69124875643 128% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432012134906 0.332605444948 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0816198254178 0.102741220458 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0495765172635 0.0668466124924 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.576618371857 0.534860350844 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.12932200803 0.148594505496 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163115420762 0.134430193775 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624953829035 0.0742795772207 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.264180844627 0.324371583561 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.105891481981 0.0638462369009 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244576958988 0.228012699653 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834017187595 0.058150111329 143% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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