Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
Over the last few centuries, the global temperature maintained a stable balance, which made almost people forget about the importance of it. However, these days, a remarkable increase in the temperature of the Earth has triggered crisis all over the world. This essay will look at the reasons for this and propose some solutions.
One of the main causes of the problem is emission of carbon dioxide. Carbon dioxide, which damages the ozone layer, comes from lots of sources, but the most problematic are those from industries and traffic vehicles. The increase in the number of vehicles and factories comes along with the growth of the population. This release thousands of tonnes of carbon dioxide every year. Moreover, burning fossil fuels in demand of heating, cooking and lighting is another source of harmful gases. Another factors include the deforestation. The paper and timber industries consume a very large number of trees every year, which are responsible for the health of forests. Trees and other plants is known to be able to clean the air by absorbing odors and pullutant gases, as well as reduce heat. However, activities involving planting trees are not enough for the consumption of trees, which imbalances the ecological environment.
Nevertheless, there are potential ways to tackle this issues, or at least reduce the affects. Goverments have the biggest responsibilites to do so. There is a need to reduce the dependence on fossil fuels and promote alternatives. It may be possible to introduce laws against industries from releasing harmful smokes in the air. The illegal cutting of the forests should be banned and have severe punishment for this. Besides, it is individuals to have duty on this problem. Instead of driving, people should use public transport or cycling more often. This will be both economically and ecologically safe. The other solution to prevent global warming is stop cutting and burning forest for cultivation.
To sum up, the Earth has got warmer and warmer due to reasons such as carbon emission and deforestation. This is a serious issue. Action must be taken urgently, otherwise life of our future generations will suffer. I am of the view that both goverments and individuals have responsibility for solving the problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, at least, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18428184282 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81185130069 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582655826558 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0702429987 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.52 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.76 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.48 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0683734281081 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0186247286888 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312667551757 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0395194937853 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.012987973963 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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