Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
The increasing temperature of the world has become a matter of concern in recent years. Although there are inevitable driving forces of this worrying trend, measures can be taken to mitigate them.
To begin, the major culprit of why the Earth becomes increasingly warmer is greenhouse effect caused by carbon dioxide emissions from industrial activities burning fossil-based fuels. For instance, oil industry releases a huge amount of greenhouse gases into the air yearly, leaving carbon footprint in the atmosphere. A further element leading to this problem is that with the hustle and bustle of modern life, metropolitan inhabitants tend to drive vehicles which are not environmentally-friendly such as cars and motorbikes due to its convenience and flexibility. Moreover, as industry expansions lead to the need for more land resource to construct factories, massive deforestation can be witnessed. Since there are not enough trees left to absorb CO2, the proportion between CO2 and O2 in the atmosphere will be instable, worsening the situation.
However, there are several actions that governments and citizens could take into account to solve the aforementioned problem. First of all, each individuals can change their lifestyle towards environmental protection. For instance, we can use eco-friendly means of transportation such as electric cars. We can even take this further by car pooling when sharing the same destination. Another measure worth investing in is low-carbon economies. The governments should encourage enterprises to use alternative sources of power including solar and wind energy. Finally, they should impose stricter punishments as a deterrent against illegal logging activities.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that industry expansion and people’s habit are responsible for global warming. Yet, various measures can be taken to tackle this pressing issue.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72084805654 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2550250158 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685512367491 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7383865041 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.1875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112577352483 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351829690729 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275593726703 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738102815146 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366514871829 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.6 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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