The government spends about 220 million pounds a year supporting museums and art galleries in the UK, and a similar amount subsidising the visual and performing arts.This is a huge sum to spend on minority interests, and the money would be better spent on
The government spends a lot of money ( around 220 million ) a year on backing museums and galleries in the United Kingdom and a similar amount on the visual and performing arts. And is it worth to spend money on this things, if there are many homeless and hungry children over the world?
Actually, I agree that this is a huge sum to spend on minority interests, because how I said above is just one of all issues in our world. The government can spend money on sights and other attractions, but they should know that the money would be better spent on more important things, how it is said on the topic. And furthermore, it should be up to the people who enjoy cultural attractions to pay for them.
Firstly, it really will be better, if the government fund money on more significant things. For example, to medicine, because there are many terrible diseases nowadays, from which you can ill or even die. Although medicine is progressing so fast, it can be more useful to spend on this and to make medical care more available for all layers of citizens.
Secondly, right education is a key moment on forming yourself how man. And it is important to spend money on universities, schools and stuff like that, which will grow new generation with positive sights and opinions. In addition, education is playing a significant role, it increases the level of the country.
In conclusion, I want to say that every government should fund money on necessary things, which will play the important role in the life of the country and over the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216393442623 0.247107183377 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.131147540984 0.155533422707 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0786885245902 0.0946595960268 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0459016393443 0.0501214627716 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0491803278689 0.0437548338989 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127868852459 0.122226691241 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0131147540984 0.0403226058552 33% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.60504189477 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0295081967213 0.0326793684256 90% => OK
Particles: 0.00327868852459 0.00163938923432 200% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0918032786885 0.0861772015684 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0327868852459 0.021408717616 153% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0229508196721 0.011925033212 192% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1542.0 1933.35771543 80% => OK
No of words: 274.0 316.048096192 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62773722628 6.12580529183 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.302919708029 0.374742101984 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.222627737226 0.28420135186 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.160583941606 0.203846283523 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.113138686131 0.137316102897 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60504189477 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.037074148 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 55.0536242186 60.7387585426 91% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 22.8333333333 20.7743622355 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8076458316 49.517814964 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 127.492653851 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7743622355 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.08333333333 0.814263465372 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 45.096107056 49.1944974215 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.57971014493 1.69124875643 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.591519138962 0.332605444948 178% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.127889853351 0.102741220458 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0947590920182 0.0668466124924 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.643387959677 0.534860350844 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.150721938626 0.148594505496 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.248552232738 0.134430193775 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164631093776 0.0742795772207 222% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.279860677076 0.324371583561 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.10358648336 0.0638462369009 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.347649601838 0.228012699653 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160381560005 0.058150111329 276% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9