Growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum.
To what extent you agree or disagree?
Nowadays one of the challenges faced by the health care system is to tackle the issues related to the increasing number of overweight people. The obesity is considered as the sole cause for various diseases. In order to find a solution some people suggest to teach more physical education lessons in schools. We will discuss both the pros and cons of the statement.
One of the solution came out was to introduce the physical education lessons in the classes. Firstly, This can bring awareness in the minds of children from younger ages. Awareness can bring great change in the attitude towards the health. Secondly, the physical education can bring a good body tone in the children, which may prevent obesity. Exercises will lead to burning of more fats in the body, especially trunkal fat.
However, its not always possible to provide more importance to physical education by keeping other subjects aside. There will be practical difficulties in providing more periods during school hours. Its not just the physical education, rather we need to practice a healthy lifestyle. We should cultivate a healthy food style, junk foods must not be sent to or should not be provided in the school premises.
Though I agree to a small extent that the physical education can bring change in obesity; I would be much more stringent onto the point that its the practice of healthy food and lifestyle that can bring the change.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest teaching'.
Suggestion: suggest teaching
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...y, especially trunkal fat. However, its not always possible to provide more imp...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...much more stringent onto the point that its the practice of healthy food and lifest...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256704980843 0.247107183377 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.130268199234 0.155533422707 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0919540229885 0.0946595960268 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0536398467433 0.0501214627716 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0306513409962 0.0437548338989 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.103448275862 0.122226691241 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0344827586207 0.0403226058552 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54758463976 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0421455938697 0.0326793684256 129% => OK
Particles: 0.00383141762452 0.00163938923432 234% => OK
Determiners: 0.11877394636 0.0861772015684 138% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0498084291188 0.021408717616 233% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0114942528736 0.011925033212 96% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1422.0 1933.35771543 74% => OK
No of words: 239.0 316.048096192 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94979079498 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20517956788 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.380753138075 0.374742101984 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.297071129707 0.28420135186 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.209205020921 0.203846283523 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117154811715 0.137316102897 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54758463976 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.037074148 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577405857741 0.56093040696 103% => OK
Word variations: 57.3033525553 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0714285714 20.7743622355 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8117513237 49.517814964 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.571428571 127.492653851 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 20.7743622355 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.814263465372 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 46.7785415421 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.83928571429 1.69124875643 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.522203705033 0.332605444948 157% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11528621993 0.102741220458 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0865033789836 0.0668466124924 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.592326025735 0.534860350844 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.159348109055 0.148594505496 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.221863113949 0.134430193775 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109345655896 0.0742795772207 147% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.322961568739 0.324371583561 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.138798944649 0.0638462369009 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.355466495767 0.228012699653 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131270246536 0.058150111329 226% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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