Happiness
Most people agree that happiness is one of the most important parts of a person’s life. This essay will explore the concept of happiness and discuss ways people can become happier.
Happiness has several key elements. First of all, for people to be happy, they must also be content. Contentment is connected with many aspects of our lives such as our physical bodies, appearance, finances, careers and relationships. If a person is not satisfied with all of these aspects of life, they will be unable to say they are happy. Happiness is also closely connected to a particular state of mind. Sometimes people suffer depression not because of any tangible issue in their lives, but rather through a combination of unfortunate genetics or poor mental health.
There are several ways that people can achieve a happy state of mind. Firstly, external factors that can be changed need to be dealt with. For example, by finding a job they love or getting out of a bad relationship, a positive state of mind will be easier to achieve. In addition, considering one’s own thinking process could help people to identify any bad thinking habits they may have fallen into. Doing this will give people the opportunity to get into the practice of thinking positively.
In conclusion, contentment and thinking habits are the two primary factors that define happiness, and by changing the circumstances that are within our power while remembering to have a healthy mindset, a continued state of happiness can be achieved. [Collected]
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09126984127 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83719613524 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59126984127 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.176163531 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6428571429 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209250842043 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105235502089 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130856183911 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15723577055 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731812671702 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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