Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many scientists have claimed that happiness virtually plays an important role in human lives, however, the precise definition of this has been the controversial issue all around the world. Though it is hard to define what exactly happiness stands for, there are several factors which helps people achieve it.
Happiness, as in psychology, is defined as the mental feeling that cannot be seen or even be measured. Moreover, it depends on each individual point of view, and while this factor is one’s sense of happy, that may not be other’s consideration of happiness. For instance, some people tend to assume that wealth makes them happy, whereas others argue that good health brings them that feeling.
Furthermore, there is a combination of factors contributing to happiness. Some recent studies have shown that good relationship among family and friends or society is likely the major element. In addition, better health, higher education, essential skills to earn money or peaceful environment are considered to be the contributors to acquire happiness. Nonetheless, this does not mean that the one without those mentioned above cannot be happy. Since happiness has different meanings among people, it is extremely important to clarify what is your desire, your thirst, and once you have explored that, here comes happiness.
By the way of conclusion, although happiness, the vital element in life, is difficult to set a clear definition, there are a number of factors in acquiring it as long as people find out what they really want to achieve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, really, so, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.256 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80959498861 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8641906838 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.454545455 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182338247827 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615048370402 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671612986884 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105301692409 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556630225783 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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