Happiness if often considered difficult to define. Why is this? What factors determine happiness?
Many people think that happiness is very hard to explain. This is because people have different thoughts, and I believe that there are many elements that determine happiness.
There are various reasons why the definition of satisfaction is considered challenging, but I reckon it derives from the differences in people’s thinking. Some people regard leading a material life as a top priority that can make them delighted. For others, however, health and family are of greater importance. Another explanation for the discrepancy in people’s joy of life is due to their living conditions. For example, in the rural parts of Africa, inhabitants feel happy simply when they can afford the whole family’s fundamental demands such as food and clothes, so that they will not have to live in poverty. By contrast, those who live in big cities and the rich can only feel their life in the journeys around the world or the fashionable clothing they wear. Some others who live far away from their relationships content themselves when they and their beloved gather together on some special occasions such as national holidays or valentines.
In my opinion, there are several important factors that determine happiness. However, the most important ones are money, friends, and health conditions. Firstly, possessions are an extremely essential contributor to people’s contentment because without money we cannot do anything, like paying for the bills. Korean people usually say “Home is a happy place”, but unless you have enough money, you cannot enjoy your “happy place”. Secondly, social relationships are a significant factor of pleasure. When you share the joy with your friends, it doubles. Lastly, health also plays a part in people’s happiness. Only when we have good health condition can we enjoy our life. For instance, we cannot live a normal life or suffer from pains the whole life if we expose to joint-related diseases.
In conclusion, because of different mindsets, people define happiness in many ways. However, I think financial condition, socialization, and physical condition play the key role in life satisfaction.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i reckon, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32743362832 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89362939575 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575221238938 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5078363887 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.95 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.65 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130718589945 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414859597277 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552332754586 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941714668032 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341845122722 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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