The holiday of a lifetime!
Last April, I had visited Singapore as a holiday of my lifetime! This is the first time I travel to a foreign country.
At the beginning, I was about to buy an all-in package includes guided tour with holiday brochures at the travel agent. I hoped there would be a sightseeing tour of a stunning landscape and we were going to stay at a holiday resort. My plan for a holiday destination was on an occasion which had a long weekend. In Vietnam, there will be an occasion at the end of April and last till first 2 days of May. I decided to choose this time to get away from it all.
One day, when I was chatting about Singapore plan with a friend of mine, then he told me that he had family in Singapore so I could stay at his place and save a bunch of money. This was a brilliant idea. I thought his place was somewhere in the countryside or at least the suburb, so I could enjoy the picturesque village atmosphere and so many breathtaking views so I said "Okay".
On 28th April, we arrived at the Tan Son Nhat airport and the check-in desk early. After the passport control, we waited in a departure lounge. Spending 2 hours at the airport and 2 hours on the plane, we were finally in Singapore.
The first thing I explored in Singapore was the MRT which is Mass Rapid Transit. It was super fast. It took only about 2 minutes to go from one place to another place with the speed 100km/h. The second impression was the Chinatown, where could be considered as a tourist trap because of hordes of tourists from day till night. In this place, there were also many local crafts such as souvenirs with the word "I love Singapore" on it and other Merlion image gifts. Because I traveled on my own, so I had to do self-catering things, such as finding ways to places myself due to maps in MRT stations or bus stations, eating without knowing anything about the food. It was a little bit uncomfortable!
In the future, if I have enough money, in my short break, I will definitely rent a charter flight to a wildlife safari or a far-off destination with a lot of places of interest, stay at a youth hostel to relax and enjoy my life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, may, second, so, then, at least, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38403990025 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65056430501 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526184538653 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3808778962 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5263157895 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1052631579 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47368421053 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0937100040784 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320352987683 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706693766645 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0678133075243 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105344694704 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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