The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?
Over the past few years, a prevailing phenomenon of accelerating goods production for consumer’s satisfaction, which takes its toll on the environment. In spite of negative influences resulted from this trend, there are feasible measures to address this problem.
As a matter of fact, there are a few rationales to hold accountable for the mass production which provokes environmental degradation. The first cause is that the upsurge of manufacturing industry could be considered as one of the primary culprits spurring the enormous production of merchandise. In fact, these days, all of these industries have a tendency to avail fossil fuel for producing process, which consequently discharges a large influx of gas emission to the environment. As a result, this is the main culprit of resulting in air contamination leading to detrimental implications for people's health condition, particularly wrecking their respiratory systems. Another fact is that the trend of growing quickly the population is prone to generate destructive ramifications on the environment. To facilitate human-living conditions, the producers have the attempt to boost the productivity satisfying the consumption of resident in term of essential things. Additionally, this will induce the problem of overusing in citizens leading to throwing-away their product extravagantly that are able to plunge the environment into being ruined.
As far as it is concerned, there are a multitude of efficient approaches to eradicate the aforementioned problems. The first method is to impose a higher tax on the manufacturing commodities. All of these products are also lifted up the cost, which is likely to be subject to the resident’s consideration in opting for a product. This may alleviate the total consumption of human and the number of goods produced in the sense that the adverse trend of spoiling the environment will be mitigated instantly. In other words, the governments should operate a plethora of campaigns to raise the public perception regarding the dire corollaries resulted from the mass production. As a result, if this measure is set off, not only will the citizens perceive the detrimental effect of excessive production but also put an end to the environmental degradation.
In conclusion, as cited above, though the considerably increasing production of merchandise will pose crippling problems to the environment, there are still plausible effectively solutions to eliminate this problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, regarding, so, still, in conclusion, in fact, as a matter of fact, as a result, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2115.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58047493404 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40030716534 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564643799472 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9263909074 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.1875 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6875 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259325695244 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787567870152 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067418776432 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172614893935 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230198532798 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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