Information technology has changed our lives in many ways and dominates our homes, leisure and work activities.
Do the benefits outweigh the drawbacks?
The permeation of information technology in modern societies is well observed as it is present in our homes, our activities at work and for leisure. This has a myriad of benefits, which I would argue to eclipse the drawbacks.
The prevalence of information technology provokes worrying attitudes for several reasons. Forefront among them are concerns regarding addiction to social media and its impact on work activities. Fascination over social networking sites such as Facebook and Instagram is often reflected, for example, in the many hours users spend on these sites, which reduces the amount of time dedicated to work. Another argument against the domination of I.T in the modern world associates its powerful storage capacity with the risk of a security breach. In other words, as individuals and corporations upload their files on to cloud storage, hackers may hijack the system and bypass digital protection to steal confidential information for their own gains.
Nevertheless, advances in the sphere of information technology have notably transformed our societies in positive ways. Entertainment and news update is a good case in point, as those who have access to the Internet can browse Youtube and online newspapers for these respective purposes. Modern households are also changed for the better, becoming safer and convenient as they are equipped with advanced alarming systems and programmed electrical appliances. Most notably, practices at workplace have changed racially due to the strong presence of I.T. The examples are diverse, ranging from online conferences, automation in production lines to huge data storage and manipulation. The problem of a security breach, albeit worth acknowledging, could be solved as new protective measures and complex logarithms are devised.
In conclusion, it is my belief that although the prevalence of I.T does have its downsides, they are still outweighed by their beneficial counterparts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55518394649 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03090497043 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648829431438 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6855850563 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.769230769 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175555960356 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570067488811 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075581853759 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105135035339 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711490615641 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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