The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although
some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has
been positive.
What are your opinions on this?
The internet play, I firmly believe, an essential role on every individual’s life, either children or adult people. The question, however, is whether this technology has a numerous merits for fellows or not. Despite popular belief, I am, to a huge extent, an advocate of the former approach.
Granted, the internet, from the practical view point, positively affect the way that we make communication with people specially people who live in faraway places. Most people have to immigrate to foreign countries due to the appropriate occupation and education, admittedly the applications such as an email, face time and the imo give them great opportunity to be in touch with their loved ones. However, people should be careful about the time that they use in order to use the social application and don’t forget about people who are around them. Furthermore, thanks to the internet we have access a bulk of information which assist people in a various positions. As an illustration we can mention that before invention of this technology in an earlier times a simple research took a long time to do, but nowadays just by clicking the bottom you can reach a vast amount of information.
On the other hand, nevertheless, there are a various websites and sources, some of them just spread false information or offensive videos or programs that negatively influence teenagers’ life such as porn movies. Hence, parents and government should provide a limitation to make the internet much safer. As an example they can put an age limitation to have a direct observation on people who use the special website. Moreover, a number of folks addict to the online games and competitions that online website has thus, they spend a huge amount of their time in the internet and just play, then they forget about their responsibilities, exercises.
All things considered, although the internet has some drawbacks on people, I wholeheartedly contend that the blessings of the internet outweigh and outnumber its demerits, particularly in terms of a vast communication and source of information.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'merit'?
Suggestion: merit
... whether this technology has a numerous merits for fellows or not. Despite popular bel...
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Line 2, column 662, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'position'?
Suggestion: position
...mation which assist people in a various positions. As an illustration we can mention that...
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Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tation to make the internet much safer. As an example they can put an age limitati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, thus, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16764705882 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05630410949 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2015912148 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.153846154 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0820827238519 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031959596657 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274688478545 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.051322266894 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015541064931 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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