The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effect on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal?
The topic of homosexual marriage has always been a moot point. Despite having the view of critics not supporting it and finding it a negative trend, others see it as natural as heterosexual marriages. To withstand my point, same sex marriages must be legal.
On the one hand, marriage is a personal affair and much intimated decision of two individuals deciding to live together. Being a gay or lesbian is a matter of one’s choice and very natural. Nobody has any right to say that same sex marriage is illegal. We must embrace gay marriages and urge government to make it legal so that this community can also get all legal rights like straight couples. These rights involve becoming nominee as a partner in health insurance, life insurance, property rights and many others. This will make LGBTQ couples feel validated and as humans as heterosexual couples. Legal rights will help gay couples to feel secure, accepted and live life freely. Therefore, legalizing gay marriage will make the world better place to live.
In contrast, some critics might think that gay marriages are very unnatural since a man and woman have been considered always to mate and make this world run than accepting this concept which is against of religious and moral beliefs. Even, many religions specifically like Islam and Christianity find it a sin as per their holy scriptures. Mostly people in the world urges that only a straight couple can give birth to a child and make this cycle of world run which makes homosexual couples invalidated to exist. These people say that if gay marriage will get legalized, it will disrupt the society and create chaos than contributing anything meaningful in the society.
In conclusion, I strongly restate that gay marriage will not have any bad impact on the society rather it will have a profound impact to make every human believe in the saying “love is love” irrespective of any gender.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[6]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.
Suggestion: have always been considered
...re very unnatural since a man and woman have been considered always to mate and make this world run than ac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9475308642 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6105400975 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561728395062 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9617558438 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.1875 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323332183846 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103157452371 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527577972594 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18124338416 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514638957989 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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