It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantage and disadvantages of this?
In this competitive world, students nowadays have the tendency to leave a gap between lower and higher studies. For many students, this leisure year gives an extended period of time for learning additional knowledge. However, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. In this essay, I will spark my views on some of the reasons why not joining the university after school is so famous and some of the challenges to be overcome.
Let's commence by looking at the advantage of discontinuity before joining the university. One of the main positives facets of leaving year off is that it strengthen our professional knowledge. What I mean by this is that we have the chance to do jobs and training related to our studies, which will help to prepare us for our life before joining the higher academic institute. For instance, one of my friends started to work in the company after completing his school life. One month ago, he was hired by the reputed organization after the completion of his higher studies.
Secondly, additional income could be earned which could be spent on our higher studies, if we do some jobs prior to joining for the campus. Obviously, this will release the economic burden to the family. For example, one of my brothers started teaching for one year after accomplishing his school life and he collected a certain amount for the university and his family does not have to support him economically.
Turning the other side of the argument, diminishing interest in studies became a major problem after one year as the enthusiasm towards studies after a certain break goes down. Due to this learner have the chance to perform badly in their university life, so he may not complete his higher education. Once my friend has not finished his bachelor's as he leaves one year off after his school life.
All things considered, joining jobs before embarking university life is challenging. We need to weigh up the pros of having additional skill related to certain jobs and collecting funds and so on, and the cons of diminishing joy towards studies. Personally, I believe the merits in terms of experience eventually outweigh any drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, i mean
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91576086957 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71393122103 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2047357341 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183818962226 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600312465775 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041055229726 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108843665242 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444959733862 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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