it is better to have a secure job
The first reason coming to my mind is that, due to the high cost of living, people should have a job in order to meet their basic needs. As matter of fact, if people do not have a secure job, they will have a lot of difficulties in their lives, since the quality of life is becoming increasingly difficult. It is not possible for people to pay their way such as paying bills, housing and buying car and home, all of which make people's lives easier and enjoyable if they have no job. An example will illustrate this viewpoint much better. There was a time that I had graduated from a famous university in my country, and I wanted to find a job that I love it. Subsequently, I was looking for to find my ideal job, but after one-year searching, I could not find it, and then, I had decided to find an irrelevant job because I could not afford my expenses. For this reason, I strongly believe that due to the difficult quality of life, it is better for people to have a secure job.
Another reason why I agree with it is that there is no guarantee for people to find a satisfying job if they wait for it. Hence, what I am certain is that the stressful situation for finding that job make them nervous. In addition, nowadays, there are a lot of hard mental diseases deriving form waiting for finding a job make them satisfied. For example, when I was a bachelor student, I had a part-time job at university campus magazine as a reporter. As I remember, one time, I had an interview with doctor Nejati who is a well-known psychologist in my country. He told me that based on his experience and researchers, nowadays, money is more important for people who are in the searching of a work. He also told me that since people generally have a tendency to have memorable and enjoyable time in their life, they cannot the painful moments of waiting for a job. As a result, the more people have a secure job, the less they bear stress and the quality of their life will increase.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, so, then, well, for example, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36141304348 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5480017723 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486413043478 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7576987104 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5333333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335179971709 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127031600309 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102201237865 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285010447709 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805029471572 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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