It is better for students to live away from home than living with parents To what extent do you agree or disagree

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It is better for students to live away from home than living with parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a hard decision making that parents send their children to boarding school or day school. Both ways have their own disadvantages and disadvantages. In my view, I prefer to choose boarding school to benefit the young generation more.

It is of benefit to children if they are sent to boarding school. Living away from home can cultivate children’s independence abilities. Children will face many detail problems, such as laundries and cleaning the dormitories, when they are in boarding school. And that is good to their future life. For example, some Chinese students are really hard to ad...

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It is a hard decision making that parents send their children to boarding school or day school.
It is a hard decision making for parents to send their children to boarding school or day school.

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