It is generally believed that internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information Discuss both these views and give your opinion

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It is generally believed that internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Internet is considered as one of the best means of communication at various levels in the society. There are different opinions regarding the same. Others suggest that its not the best kind for information.

Certain people has the belief that Internet is the best source for the communication. They hold the points that anyone can get any kind of information from anywhere at all the time. For example a man who is being in a position to know a nearby hospital for any emergency treatment, if he is away from hometown. Then he can see Internet to get that piece of information within seconds. And even we would get most of the news online on the way. But its not always the same.

On the other hand, people who considers that the internet as not the ultimate source for information has their points to ponder. They believe that the as of today there are chances that the information uploaded can be fake. For example recently there has been a news found in Internet saying that one of the movie actor was dead. And it was circulated among the people via internet. But later on the actor himself had to come to clarify that it was a false news. That means the authenticity of the information given is under suspicion.

So we get most of the information from internet anytime anywhere but there's no way to check if the information got is true or not. Hence in my opinion its not a good thing to have a knowledge, which may be false. Though I agree that we can have much information from Internet.

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Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 450, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'false news'.
Suggestion: false news
...self had to come to clarify that it was a false news. That means the authenticity of the inf...
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Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...tion from internet anytime anywhere but theres no way to check if the information got ...
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Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... if the information got is true or not. Hence in my opinion its not a good thing to h...
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Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...got is true or not. Hence in my opinion its not a good thing to have a knowledge, ...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y opinion its not a good thing to have a knowledge, which may be false. Though I ...
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Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... have a knowledge, which may be false. Though I agree that we can have much informati...
^^^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'for example', 'kind of', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221843003413 0.247107183377 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.160409556314 0.155533422707 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0648464163823 0.0946595960268 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0443686006826 0.0501214627716 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0546075085324 0.0437548338989 125% => OK
Prepositions: 0.160409556314 0.122226691241 131% => OK
Participles: 0.0307167235495 0.0403226058552 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57529351302 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0238907849829 0.0326793684256 73% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.126279863481 0.0861772015684 147% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0204778156997 0.021408717616 96% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0102389078498 0.011925033212 86% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1501.0 1933.35771543 78% => OK
No of words: 272.0 316.048096192 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51838235294 6.12580529183 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.261029411765 0.374742101984 70% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.191176470588 0.28420135186 67% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.147058823529 0.203846283523 72% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0882352941176 0.137316102897 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57529351302 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.037074148 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511029411765 0.56093040696 91% => OK
Word variations: 49.560291397 60.7387585426 82% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.1111111111 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2517889743 49.517814964 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3888888889 127.492653851 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1111111111 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 34.2287581699 49.1944974215 70% => OK
Elegance: 1.59210526316 1.69124875643 94% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393902367223 0.332605444948 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110636876396 0.102741220458 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0590579838521 0.0668466124924 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.515225212673 0.534860350844 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.11314008448 0.148594505496 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158184940861 0.134430193775 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634502086137 0.0742795772207 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.442115333036 0.324371583561 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.102806026898 0.0638462369009 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2811652327 0.228012699653 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335361934786 0.058150111329 58% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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