It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is no doubt,we live in 21st century.Technology has changed the lifestyle of mankind.Some people believe that an internet is a best way of communication but other think it is not a good place to find information.Before giving any point of view, let us discuss about this topic in following paragraphs.
Firstly,nowadays internet play a crucial role in everyone's life.Internet is used in almost every field of life such as in education,in banking ,and so on.There are number of applications are available in the world like Facebook ,Twitter,skype and so on. With the help of these applications people can easily communicate with each other because these applications provide the facilities of chatting as well as video call.Secondly,people make their relationship strong by using these applications through internet.For example, if our relatives lives in abroad and we are India we can easily communicate with then almost in free of cost.
On the flip side,some people think that its a not good place to find information because most of people are not familiar with internet so that they face the some problems while using communication through internet and they become irritated.
Moreover ,some people like face to face communicaion insted of communication through internet thus they not prefer online chatting and videocalls.
In my opinion, internet is a brilliant means of communication because people are busy in their lif so they have no much time to communicate with each other .
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'no doubt', 'such as', 'as well as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236641221374 0.247107183377 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.148854961832 0.155533422707 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.087786259542 0.0946595960268 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0763358778626 0.0501214627716 152% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0534351145038 0.0437548338989 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.179389312977 0.122226691241 147% => OK
Participles: 0.030534351145 0.0403226058552 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.42021994153 2.80594681477 122% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0152671755725 0.0326793684256 47% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0954198473282 0.0861772015684 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00763358778626 0.021408717616 36% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1517.0 1933.35771543 78% => OK
No of words: 239.0 316.048096192 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.34728033473 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20517956788 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.334728033473 0.374742101984 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.259414225941 0.28420135186 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.209205020921 0.203846283523 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142259414226 0.137316102897 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42021994153 2.80594681477 122% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.037074148 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577405857741 0.56093040696 103% => OK
Word variations: 57.3033525553 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0891783567 37% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 39.8333333333 20.7743622355 192% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 80.6053485956 49.517814964 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 252.833333333 127.492653851 198% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.8333333333 20.7743622355 192% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 0.814263465372 348% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 3.99599198397 676% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 65.7747559275 49.1944974215 134% => OK
Elegance: 1.60273972603 1.69124875643 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346032936422 0.332605444948 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.195863500956 0.102741220458 191% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0729617182234 0.0668466124924 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.915417527162 0.534860350844 171% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122442914708 0.148594505496 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196985875188 0.134430193775 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102747375513 0.0742795772207 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.223034413823 0.324371583561 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0723913121426 0.0638462369009 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220683105797 0.228012699653 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978521670031 0.058150111329 168% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 10.4468937876 57% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.