It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and othersare not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Whenever people talk about what make successful persons such as outstanding athletes or musicians, their views will differ from that nurture plays an important role in determining people may become an expert in some fieldor they can achieve triumphs after experience difficult trainings.In my opinion, It is depends on both of factors above.
It must be admitted that there indeed exist some people born with innate talents which predict the possibly would be winner. In other words, with innate characters which affect more or less to be beneficial to master some skills,there is likelihood to become elites in an area. Besides, many evidences have been proved that those with born talents achieve more than those who do not have, which naturally become a motivator for further triumph. Therefore, an increasing number of parents begin to observe or even experiment to judge if their children fortunately possess some talents allow them to excel.
In the other hand, some people still argue for belief that with professional and systematic training,they still may become excellent people, it not only academic but also entertainment field. Somebody was not born with innate talents but they still achieved surprising brilliant performances because they desire to be an excellent in some areas and especially, they have to undergo tough and draconian trainingcourses.
In conclusion, my strongly view is that if people want to be expert in some fields, the prerequisite for anyone is that they may have innate talents or via inherited genes from their parent, and the most important thing is that professional training will make people more perfectly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2927756654 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77401899189 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600760456274 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.9826744553 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.0 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.875 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.75 7.06120827912 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187319945173 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895729542841 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033655654694 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117337198507 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139340967168 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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