It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?
There are certain things which children has to learn at a very early age. In life, children has to take mature decisions in order to know what is right and wrong. I simply agree with the given statement, and think in a positive way that, at a certain level punishment is required for children. In this essay, I will discuss both the points.
To start with, parents and teachers play a big role in terms of getting education to children. They teach children how to be good towards society, be in discipline, the way of attitude. These are the important expects of life. Today's few youngsters behave mischievous towards the people, for them punishment is necessary, so if children learns the difference between what is right and wrong then they will think ten times in order to look forward to such things.
On the other hand, at some extent punishing to teenager may get negative influence, and the child might not be share the feelings due to which he/she will scare to discuss. One should treat in a enjoyable manner with little ones. For example, when I was a child, I was getting angry when someone touches my toys, but there after my parents teach me not to behave like that and than I apologised for my inconvenient behaviour. Rather than punishing parents or teachers may treat in a good way.
Lastly, in my opinion it's the responsibility of guardians to make the little ones good and mature, and not to punish very bad.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ree with the given statement, and think in a positive way that, at a certain level punishment is ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a enjoyable manner" with adverb for "enjoyable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...will scare to discuss. One should treat in a enjoyable manner with little ones. For example, when I w...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...l scare to discuss. One should treat in a enjoyable manner with little ones. For ...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: thereafter
...angry when someone touches my toys, but there after my parents teach me not to behave like ...
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Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...ts teach me not to behave like that and than I apologised for my inconvenient behavi...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...in a good way. Lastly, in my opinion its the responsibility of guardians to make...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and mature, and not to punish very bad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, look, may, so, then, as to, for example, in my opinion, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66141732283 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51501782312 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594488188976 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.964996579 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0769230769 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320698562268 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980355871335 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626271569926 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174299732866 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916732670806 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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